Vector Me!

[edit] I would like more C&C on my vector, but sadly, my mom did not want me to be posting it on the net (she told me that after i did :lol: )

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Thanks,

Kate

very nice. i dont like how the left foot is overlapped with the grass. it kinda makes ur foot look cut up. the small slices of grass are nice, but the other, chunks of grass dont really look good with the other better grass. :D clouds aren't very realistic compaired to the person.

Yeah the clouds need some work and so does hair. I mean halfway down on one strand it starts out all nice and thin and the boom, it becomes a glob.

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Originally posted by Atolar@10 Minutes Ago
very nice.* i dont like how the left foot is overlapped with the grass.* it kinda makes ur foot look cut up.* the small slices of grass are nice, but the other, chunks of grass dont really look good with the other better grass.* :D* clouds aren't very realistic compaired to the person.

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Ya, i didnt work very hard on the bg :lol:

The main thing that I feel needs improving is how jagged all the lines are. It needs to be more smoothed out. I love the grass, it looks great. Was this one of your first vectors?

The grass is very nice, sky needs to have gradient, blue to white blue at top white at bottom, not totally white but a lighter shade of blue.

Her cheeks need improving aswell, look like she has dents in her face. Just alter the tones and that'll be fine :)

If you hate shorts, give her cut-off pants, that are like long shorts.

Her clothes are a bit jaged aswell as her hair but I think that is the theme your going for here. Her hair line needs a lot of work in the middle, it needs smoothening slightly.

One cloud, on the bottom left side of sky looks stretched, duplicate another cloud to replace it, make the back clouds smaller to give perspective. Sun could be made a bit smaller and added a gradient possibly, a radial gradient dark orange to yellow.

The ideal font to use in this would be Advance, its probablly on dafont.com. Make the font smaller aswell.

Overall its a great piece, just a lot of minor tweaks need to be made, then it'll be a better piece again, if you want any more advice or you want me to have a go then PM me.

Thanks for the help guys (especially cold catalyst)

I copied it to a notepad file so i can still look at it

And TacoX, this was my 2nd vector

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