Another new one

http://fractical.teamhalo.co.uk/foru...hl2%20copy.jpg Comments please. ;)

Render doesn't fit the bg. the text and the bg match but the render.......

Also your brushing could be better and the choice of color for the bg should probably be a little more red.

i like, but i dont like the shapes you put on, it takes away from the render and the bg, let the bg show and try adding some text brushes maybe to the bg and take out the shapes :) but keep it up your doing good :)

Try making the backgound the color of the orange on the render (the color the HL logo is) and see if that adds to it's overall appearance. Otherwise it looks pretty good, though I'm not too fond of the font.

Oh, and it should have a border.