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I've gone too far in this life
I've given up on hope
It's something easy to say
But, all I'm left is broke
I hear the words you say
Everynight I close my eyes
Trying hard not to make the best of this
It's not you I despise (DESPISE)
Make sure to sleep safely, I do everynight
Under my pillow, is my sharpened knife
Relieving the anger, with the tears in my eyes
With these last words, god will you just let me die? (LET ME DIE, JUST DIE, JUST DIE)
I've got the choice, of life and death (LIFE AND DEATH)
So I scream out (RESCUE ME)
Alone with my chance, to take my own life (OWN LIFE)
The knife's in my hands (SAVE ME PLEASE)
What is there really left for me, for me.
Make sure to sleep safely, I do everynight
Under my pillow, is my sharpened knife
Relieving the anger, with the tears in my eyes
With these last words, god will you just let me die? (LET ME DIE, JUST DIE, JUST DIE)
I stroke the knife against my wrists (DON'T CONTROL IT)
My wrists in blood, I won't stop this (DON'T SAVE ME)
If only you could, see thses tears (THAT I'VE CRIED)
With these last words (YOUR LAST GOODBYE)
What is there really left for me, for me.
Make sure to sleep safely, I do everynight
Under my pillow, is my sharpened knife
Relieving the anger, with the tears in my eyes
With these last words, god will you just let me die? (LET ME DIE, JUST DIE, JUST DIE)
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08-13-2005, 08:45 PM
ilovecoheed
alot of emotion, good wording. I like it, how exactly would the beat go for this song? i kinda wanna make a guitar part for it lol.
08-13-2005, 09:37 PM
rocket2234
It's different from the other songs I've written. The caps are supposed to be screaming, but the rhythm isn't something that I could tell you over the internet. But I really need to get a guitar soon.
08-15-2005, 02:40 AM
Deadloader
hmm if you could maybe add me to msn i have a guitar i'd love to make a tune for this it's my style :P
