tech backgorund

hey this was my 1st shot with tech brushes i think for my 1st time wit tech bushes it looks fine any suggestions?

http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/1736/nesquik2lj.jpg

mad one have i not played u on counter-strike for xbox? im antidotexxx
btw that sig is pretty cool man. For your first try its sweet...

Typo on Watch. And it seems too... Active.

I think everything flows real nice but you Nesquick text kills it.

too much tech and not enough actuall brushing with anything but tech... rabies tech brushset i think? :P you may also wish to work on your font but nice try i see you did pixel stretch in the bg? well anyways just ease up on the tech nice for a first try though :P