New Sig

Ok i worked quite awhile on this trying to get the right outcome. C+C?
http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/9120/project18kb.gif

I don't think the bg works with that render, and the render isn't blended enough. Also, it's too blue and the text doesn't look good on the render like that. I'm not trying to tear it up, I'm just trying to give my honest opinion. :D

yeah, the backgroud is too bright in places, and the background doesnt seem to have enough depth. The text isnt very clear and it looks too 'copy & pasted'