The Death of Summer

http://mysite.verizon.net/adamcavana...thofsummer.jpg
The death of summer brings new inspiration as the world falls down around us.

Interesting picture, although I feel that something is missing. Something.. Can't put my finger on what. When I think "the death of summer", I think leaves falling down from the trees and saying "See ya in 6 months", hehe. Maybe that could have helped the picture a little more. I really like the message! I also like the border, it's not always transparent borders work, but this goes very well with the picture.
Good job, hope to see more from you. :)

lower left implies negativity and the past, which is where i get the death of summer. It's not so much what the image shows but how it's setup. It (should) drag your eye really hard down and left, which is uncomfortable for the viewer, and it should make you feel alittle upset and anxious.

Thanks for the for comments. It's deffinetly missing something, I think probably a focal point.