Experiment 002

Well I made the 2nd piece of the series.

Link:
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/4...ment0022qi.jpg

EDIT:
Version 2:
http://img326.imageshack.us/img326/1826/ex...ent002v21fg.jpg

needs a tad more contrast in the brushing background, also you need to brush over the render a little to make it look more 3D. also gotta work on that tech a little. i think it would look a little better if it was dirtier, and not so controlled. text looks good, and good work on that render.

Thx for your comments undertone. I'll see if I can tune it up a bit more.

Any more comments?

Need to blend the render better, try using a dark iron effect, it'll look good on that background with a tint of blue, like 1% blue, 99% shiny black material. it'll rock then.