days of the phoenix

http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/1...ovacopy7zi.jpg

here it is, pretty simple, but it had a decent outcome

It looks like someone threw a propane tank in a fire. For that reason, I like it.

Brushing is good, but text isn't.

i think it looks to much like wheat at the ends =/

i suck at text, any ideas, or tuts for text that'd look good?