mortality

http://xs44.xs.to/pics/05354/motrality.jpg

This is a bigger version of an idea for a sig that came to me when i was sorting out all those runaway cables behind my pc

while sometimes simpler is better, not so in this case. the cables look flat, and i dont like the bevel you used for them, needs to be alot more subtle to make it looks somewhat real. also try and atleast do something with the background, this looks ultra-plain and uninteresting. lastly the text needs some serious work, its again just too boring for its own good.

i agree about the cables ..but couldnt think of a way to get them looking rounder..the BG is meant to be boring .as the background to most peoples lives is just ordinary and boring in their everyday life. and the text well damn you text you are my nemisis. :)

http://xs44.xs.to/pics/05354/mortality1.jpg

there you go had a go at rounding out the cables..and changed the text but the BG stays as it was intended :P