Quick & Simple

my first art piece hehe, i did it quick and i like it, just a little more work onit... tell me what you think...

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/3320/thoughts5sa.jpg

its ok, are thosse your brushes/ renders?

i think it could be without all the dropshadow.

I agree with madd, maybe sharp silver stroked circles with a lighter drop shadow and a sharp bevel. Change font to evanescence or advance.