My very first vector looking thing :)

Be kind, I'm still a virgin at this.

http://xs45.xs.to/pics/05362/vision.png

Thats wicked. I like it. Looks like something form 1950's science fiction movie. Very cool. I like it mate. I dont anything wrong with it. Good work.

That is awsome...Looks very...err...Vectorish...

I also dont see anything wrong. Its overall perfect.

Awesome! Great stuff. I however, do see something bad. I like how it looks like the strings go to different sections, but they don't look seperated from the bg enough so at first glance you just think that they abruptly end. Make it look a bit more 3d too. Great job. It needs a little more though. I see some things hat oculd be done. If you want i could take it and add some more stuff and we could collab off this. :)

Not bad at all, I love how abstract it is. The one thing I do dislike about it is the eye itself. It seems like the lines you drew in go over the border, which (to me atleast) looks sloppy.

This is abstract though, so I don't really know.

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/9770/powero...ydreamspeak.jpg
remindes me of that pic alot.

anyway, looks nice, but i think there should be a tad more contrast in this img, just a tad. also the eye looks a little sloppy like tacox said. the rest looks great, but a little more of a 3d effect would be very tasty. awsome job for your first.