If home is where the heart is.
and the heart is where ur love is.
where is the heart in my home?
Cant feel it or hear it beating
thats why i decided that im leaving
hook up the life support ...but it just kept beeping
My home has flatlined. no resuscitation this time.
But its fine, cuz i know in time
that it'll appreciate and miss me
and i'll miss it.
hug and kiss me when i visit
cry cuz the babies grown
and they're sorry that they missed it.
09-13-2005, 02:20 PM
HooverBag
How do you come up with this stuff? :blink: Good job though :P
09-13-2005, 09:22 PM
PlatinumKittyKat
I have a crazy life... I just write about what I know.
09-14-2005, 03:14 PM
Samuel
Pretty nice. The form is little strange, but not bad =)
09-14-2005, 08:37 PM
PlatinumKittyKat
most poems i write go along with the song i was listening to when i was writing. it works for me LoL.
