i'd thank you for the message...
you left on my telephone,
but lately i've been calling,
and.. your not at home,
i've got a great big problem,
and i'm already dead,
you promised me everything.
..and shot myself in the head.
why do you hate me,
why do you love me like you do,
i can't decide now!!
between me and you.
And your gone
you left your notebook on my bedroom floor
i looked in side
and.. realised you are just a whore,
you ate away at my heart
all i wanted was a fresh start
i hope your happy
...
nothing changes from here on now,
i'm rotting in your mind,
you cut me in a moment.
and i thank you for being kind...
09-24-2005, 08:30 PM
PlatinumKittyKat
I really like this. I like how you're showing both the positive and negative sides to a relationship/break up.
10-01-2005, 01:20 PM
Tenchido
Nice job man!!! Send it to her :)
I Did the same with my ex. I Wrote one and sent it to her over the computer... This is accually really good though. Deffinatly a keeper.
10-01-2005, 07:59 PM
Hitman
lol it rhymes sort of to yes send it to her.. i know this isnt a laughing matter but its kinda funny.. but w/e i think its all good :)
10-03-2005, 03:52 PM
randyrandy
Wow, I like you! and It!
Some parts I don't really understand, but most of it is excellent!
