or not?
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Not too bad. The brushing is alright and the color isn't too bad. The girls face doesn't need that vector shape thing covering it so remove that because it looks bad. The text is in a questionable position, maybe fix that.
The brushing is plain and pixelated. Render doesn't fit the bg.