ok i fixed a bunch of it what do u think now?http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/9...andgrey7ty.jpg
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ok i fixed a bunch of it what do u think now?http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/9...andgrey7ty.jpg
Fix the text, it's horrible, turn off the glow or mabey make it glow a firey blue, like the blue on the flame of a lighter.
add a blur
move the text to the center, or dont. but i think it might look a little better if you do. the brushing is tons better, nice job on that. maybe sharpen the bg a little, then dupe an unsharpened version of it, and blur it, then use it to give a glowy feel over the brushing.
I'm not with the monotone colouring... try ctrl+b to add a bit of yellow n such & still keep it a firey red... i dont like the text that much & agree that'd be better centered... The rest seems like a good job to me :)
my main suggestions. . .blend in the MIDDLE of the pic some. the outside is blended alright, but do something with the middle of it. i think so at least.
Eh, the text is horrible, other than that it is pretty good. Nice work.
The text totally detracts from the image use 04b03b or w/e in the corner out of the way for your name. it will look good then :)