Wings of freedom

mmm 3d abstract <3 :D , my 1st ever render from cinema is there :) hope you all like it :)

http://dick.derkan.net/wingsoffreedom.jpg

Wallpaper version avalaible on DA.

and some comments on dA on this piece :lol: are greatly aprecciated too :)

Awsome :lol:

Can you write a tutorial &#39;bout it?
It&#39;s some kind of outer space explosion or something :blink:

GJ&#33;

Lose the tech brushing and i like it.

Commented on your DA. :)

nice but i agree, too much white, and lose the tech :)

I&#39;d get rid of the soughta overlayed cloud effect, you should know what i mean, its really noticable up the top & bottome left... Anyway the clouds really destroy the rushing explosion hapening in the middle... or you could keep it & run a radial blur on zoom at 100% through it twice, that&#39;ll look sweet :)

The text brushing I&#39;d get rid of around the the title & I&#39;d keep one of the horizontal or vertical ones & run it to the edge & that&#39;d look better than them meeting in the corner...

Good job on the render though :)

there&#39;s to much white in the explosion, but overall very nice job&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; ;)

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Lose the tech brushing and i like it.

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yep ok , next time ill do ;) thx for comment

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Originally posted by rob@17 Hours Ago
nice but i agree, too much white, and lose the tech :)

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w000t rob commented my work :D yep agree with tech brushing, its just trendwhore on 3D abstracts, and it was my 1st tech brushing, thx for comment :)


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I&#39;d get rid of the soughta overlayed cloud effect, you should know what i mean, its really noticable up the top & bottome left... Anyway the clouds really destroy the rushing explosion hapening in the middle... or you could keep it & run a radial blur on zoom at 100% through it twice, that&#39;ll look sweet :)

The text brushing I&#39;d get rid of around the the title & I&#39;d keep one of the horizontal or vertical ones & run it to the edge & that&#39;d look better than them meeting in the corner...

Good job on the render though :)

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i know about the clouds, ype now i can see that it looks kinda strange, but ill next time get rid of it, or use the radial blur, what i didnt in this case.... :) and on the tech brushing how i said it was my 1st ever, so i must get some experience with it , you know what i mean :) . anyway thx for comment .


and thx for comments to all of you and im glad that you like it :)

The brushing isn&#39;t that good but keep practicing, it&#39;ll get better, there&#39;s too much white. Also the text is quite bad, choose a different font and different blending.
The C4D render looks ok. It&#39;s ok, but you need practice. :)

Hmm...
Tip: Multicolor it with different blue colors...Might look nice :)