Another new one.

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a81/ionman/ghost.jpg
Thanks to Atolar with some help on this one.

C&C Please

Don't know what everyone else thinks, but I think its good. Maybe you should add something to the left.

Yeah I thought that too but didnt know what to add to the left.

Yeah come on like 25 views and no replies!!!

i think there is a little too much contrast. contrast is a good thing, but not always and not so much. there are bright spots kinda randomly in the middle of dark. try and get it to all blend in together a little better.

Yeah, it's got too much contrast. Also the render is tiny on that canvas. The text fits with that background, but I'm not feeling either.

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a81...revisedgr2.jpg
OK new version took down the contrast and changed the colors a bit.

Better?

The render is too small, but I like it. Well done.

Ahh shit forgot to make the render bigger...thanks though

Well the newer one is an improvment, but I dunno if I like the render. Also you need help blending picture I can help you if you want.

I remember when I FIRST taught you how to brush...Haha. You're really gotten a lot better, I'm impressed with you're improvement. I like this one. The yellow is a bit bright, but that's about it. Good work man.