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The render looks a little bit stretched, the mesh holes? should be brought down in opasity a little bit. and add a color balence or two.
Pretty nice overall, just needs some touchups. Nice clear render too, other than the face it's stretched.
Sorry man, Pretty bad. The render appears to be stretched and your sig just doesnt "flow". Plus that pattern is horrible, try scan lines or something next time. Though Ive seen worse! *Cough* My first like 100 sigs *Cough*
Keep workin at it!
i think everything is awsome except the render.
I like the whole concept of it but thats pretty much all i liked.
The render looks terrible my friend. Too stretched out. The bg is good and the text is alright. Fix the render and it will be better.