I tried -
http://www.pix7.com/out.php/i682_Douca1.jpg
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You get points for trying then ;)
Good attempt, the render looks stale, it should stand out more. Also, try to work on the text, the pale yellow shadow w/e doesn't go with the bg.
I like the background, and the render matches welll with the text, but as shurai said, it doesnt stand out enough
the bg is great i like it - its just the render and text. like Shuri said try to find a new font to work with. also the render is alittle to small and doesnt stand out from the bg. overall not bad at all.
did you take the saturation out....try and make your render a bit bigger...and one thing ive found to make text neater is to use more squarish fonts...thats just a me thing though
Lower opacity on scan lines. Center the render more, make it bigger and change to font.
