metroid prime 2 sig

C & C plz

had to do the beam by hand...pain in the ass lol

http://img420.imageshack.us/img420/8...oidcopy3ay.jpg

that looks great good job, lol i thought the beam was part of the render

thanx! lol sadly i couldn't find one with the beam...so i made one lol

I never did see that render with a beam either so it looks like you did it. I would definitely remove the scanlines from the beam/render. I normally like scanlines only on the background fading into the render. They make the beam look kinda crappy there. I think the background looks good but is quite dull. The next is definitely your most creative and good looking so far. Overall, I know you're improving. Good work! ;)

It's brilliant! What more can i say? Nice work

thanx lot ob i'll edit that and see if i like it better.

i wanted it to have a kinda dreamy effect on the bg and render...

man i remember when i first came here...everyone was so good and i sucked hard...now that i've improved this much it's kinda funny to look back and see all those little mistakes i made. and to look back at old sigs and say "wtf i thought that looked good?" lol

thanx for the C & C...i'm off to make more interface sigs for ppl lol

http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/1...oidcopy4sz.jpg



does this look better?

the beam looks good, but there would be more light over the end of the barrel, try doing that, also lower the scanlines' opacity over samus a lil, looks weird over a render :|

Feather the scan lines off of the render, and the text might be too bold for my taste, but that's just my opinion. Nice work overall man.

updated it in my sig i think it looks better thanx for the c and c