My Card

hi guys,
C&C please.
not for professional. use, just for fun but dont let that spoil your usefull tips :)

http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/900/kaartje0ca.jpg

Its very empty and dark, Change the text to a lighter colouro r maybe add a small white outer glow.
Put something in the BG like maybe a very faint gradient.
How long did it take like 4mins? If it was for a business or something it wouldn't get a lot of attention but theres not a lot of things wrong with it just not a lot of things right with it either.

it took like 5 mins to make indeed, took a bit longer to come up with though. i want to keep it simple but not boring, guess its to boring. dont want to make a busy card with thingy's and such in it. ill try to change the txt color and add a glow and see what that does, thanks for comment

Yeah it might be because the sun is shining on my screen why it looks so dark.

maybe, it is quite dark but not extreemly in my eyes. maybe someone else could comment on the darkness just to be sure. anyway i added some minor changes:

http://img494.imageshack.us/img494/8454/kaartje2sx.jpg

Definatly better maybe the outer glow was a bit too much not sure.

I really like the way you joined the h up to i, thats nice :P

haha i like the outer glow. on the doodle on the left. not to sure on the glow on the text.

the thing which connects the 'h' t the 'i' doesnt align properly so i would fix that and mabey change the background but apart from the h and the i thing it looks alright

yeah i noticed that and fixed it.. and i distorted it a bit.
i think it looks cool but might be a bit to..out of place i guess

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/1814/kaartje2cu.jpg

You should do an outline of a table, now that it's sideways it looks like it should be laying on a table.