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It's pretty cool, maybe change the placement of the text a little. I think the color's also a little too dulled and blurred, try to make the render a bit more dynamic. Though it has a few things that could be improved, I much prefer it over your current ;), great job.
add more cyan in to the highlights pretty cool though
I agree with Tetsuo...that would make it look a lot better. Good job though, I like this one.
you....are....god.... I'm assuming you made that from scratch? if you did than would you kindly make a tut on it :D
Ooooh i like this one a lot :D
nice render, simplicity alway win