My first

Yup, first bigger thingy.
So far I&#39;ve only been doing sigs. I&#39;m a newbie >.<

http://img419.imageshack.us/img419/812/project2ok.gif

i&#39;m afraid of all that spaaaaace :D

it&#39;s almost like you made a sig then stretched it out :P

Haha r, that was a good one.

I agree that there&#39;s too much space. The background is too light, maybe darken the color and brush it a bit more. I&#39;d like to see what you can do with this one.

it has potential... as it sits right now though, I&#39;d just crop it and move the text up and make a sig out of it...

I actually like it that it&#39;s light. Thanks for the critique.
If anyone has any more tips on how to fill it up a little more maybe?

Maybe you can crop that... Copy the right eye, flip it horizontally, move it to the left, and change the brush (not the brush itself but the brushing)...

It looks kinda nice...GJ&#33;

http://img469.imageshack.us/img469/4...ojectv20si.gif

Tried another way ;P

I don&#39;t like the brushing >.<

this one looks much better but blend the eye a little more

that looks quite good, only thing is that because the eye looks flat the brushing looks 3d sort of so it looks weird...

It was supposed to look like the eyes on a paper or something and the hand is drawing it, but I don&#39;t know how to give it the 3d kind of deeper effect.
Can&#39;t even explain it well enough >.<

Any tips would be much appreciated.