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well i don't know what part you did and what part is render, but that color clash isn't working out too well at the bottom.
Where the red colors starts is too drastic, blend it in more so there isn't one solid line of color. Other than that, looks pretty generic to me, but nice job.
pretty nice but the there should be a tranisition int o the red from the green maybey not a large one but just sumit which gets rid of that line which goes the entire lehgth of the render. I also hink you should lose the grid lines
It was goood until the red bit loaded...
you should make 4 one all red one all green one all blue and one greyscale
Colouring is extremley messed up, if you give me a grayscale version of the image, i'll show you how its done if you like.
