# 146

thoughts?

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/568/sig1462le.gif

background clashes with the mood of the render in my oppinion (because i actually know that render)but it is a good abstract bg, maybe if it was darker? i enjoy the pattern that comes in at some points however the overlayed lettering could use some work. :)

yes the whole render is pretty damn sweeeet. there will be a revision of this sig, i just gotta brainstorm as to what im going to do w/ it. It will most def. be bigger so you an see more of the render.

Very nice signature vermillion, there is nothing wrong with it but i would add a touch of red on the left side so that it balances out with the red on the renders leg.
Good job

Fix the text. I think everything else has already been said.

I'd redo the text and just change the color of the brushing. Also, want to PM me a copy of the render?

well, I think you coulda done better... in fact I expect great things from you... first off, the text is awful shrink it down and put it somewhere else... the brushing is ok, just looks a littel contrasty... and it doesn't look like you did anything to the render either...

If this was coming from someone else, I'd say good job, but I've come to expect better from you.... sry

add a curves layer, make the input 20 more than the output, add a new layer on soft light filled with black, then add a layer mask and erase where its TOO dark, and read some text tuts, cuz thats nastee