general grevious sig

quite possibly another failed attempt but i dunno c+c plz
is it better than current ?




http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/9792/grevious3rk.jpg

The text is bad and the render is over blended, add a new layer of grunge brushing to add some depth and also use lightning and contrast, that should fix it.
Good try tho the style isnt bad but there is a big empty space.
Keep it up jew

A little less brushing ove the render. add a border. and try to make a sig smaller. try like 320x100. The text could use some work too. But if this was like 320by120 it wouldnt look as bad. There just way too much empty space. id also add some contrast to the render.

being a grammar nazi that i am, i have to inform you that it's spelled grievous not grevious.

i agree with antidote on the fact that it needs depth and that it feels empty.

Edit: my bad, his name really is Grevious. :P

I'd say make the render pop out more, don't over blend it.
Everything else has been said already I guess.
I think if you fix these things, it could look really nice.

your getting better but you need to add more colour cos now it just looks dead (no offense) and it is a little bear but its still a worthy attempt

Man i dono like this sig...the text is bad the borders r over blended also this ropes u have added does not fit the whole img...try to add some picture or character also if u like there u will have a better and reallistic sig
If u don't like those try to add a big text with white and add some wind and try to it ps have fun only if u explore it...lol...hehe...!!! :)

hey man sry...u r new sig was loaidng when i saw ur older sig and i criticasizd on it sry
Although far more better tha the oldest one
try to add some colours and the caracture is not senn very well u sould try to start new layers with more colours..
Also have u ever thought to add pattern on a sig is not a bad idea i think and also a thin border maybe...lol...!!! ;)