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remove the low opacity copy of the render, it looks bad.
besides that i actually like it as is.
very nice, maybe make the lines come from the top on the right hand side and make them sortof fade on both sides and ull have a great one.
Good job
renders is nice, can i get it?
the smudging doesnt look that great on the sword there, doenst flow with the motion he would be swinging it in, u could keep the half opacity render, just make it about the same size as reg render, and make it less visible, and distort it a lil with some nice filters, the white box on the left doesnt work, and the drop shadow on the shape over the right box doesnt work, also it sticks out too much, try making it just a wee bit darker than the box itself
