hawaii

inspiration from my t-shirt :P
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4...waiisig7tl.jpg

i'm not to keen on the text, i take it you wanted it to look simple so thumbs up when ya sort the text out buddy.

make the text like it is inyour current and make the trees a bit bolder make the brushing less visable anyway is still an coll idea

Add more red besides the palm trees and give the text an extreme makeover.
Other than that good job.

sorry not feelin either of these two
text is not good
i like the render but thats about it

I like the overall feel of it, colors match and text looks good to me.