First attempt..

Hopefully a good one but i will let you guys be the judge of that. Its my first attempt at space art and i really need some C+C.
http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/9426/attempt7gy.jpg
Thanks everyone.

i'm actually confused by it. What is the black meant to be?

hey, that looks like some underwater cavern or something! *cool!*

ditch the space art consept and make it an underwater cavern! add fish and sharks and stuff :)

I think it looks underwater except you (firstperson) are looking through a hole in a ship or something

An error I noticed is on top of the light where the planet on the left is there is a brushing mistake where theres a solid diganol line

Thanks guys.. at first i actually thought it looked like water but i was like... s t f u .so yeah ill change the planets for alagae and make the light dimmer so it lookst like a sub.
Thanks for the C+C, anyne else want to comment on this space art *scratch off* marine art?

wow hehe yeah i'd go with calling this an underwater piece hehe.. it's nice though

thats pretty sweet looks almost like the black is trying to hold you back GJ