Eye Drawing

I'm really enjoying this program.
http://tinypic.com/ja7s5h.png
With color:
http://tinypic.com/k20mte.png
I dunno if I should have done the red at the edges, but whatever.

Now if I may ask, why didnt you make an eye or 2 like this on your other piece? I think it would've went a bit better. It took me a little bit to find the face in your abstract piece but I guess the way it should be.

Something that might help your abstract piece a little bit would be make another eye. Since your 1 eye is rather large (comparing to the nose) and is out of prespective (the angel is ackward making it look like the eye is facing you where the nose is at an angle)

That's the point, it's a distorted face, so to say.

I like it. The shapes are a little off though, like the centre of the eye. Colour? Only light. Would look good =)

I may add color. Might look good.
*tries it right now*

Hmm. The blue bit looks a little off now , the shape. But still nice ^.^

May I ask what program you are using?

And on the hand of the piece you made; it's different: really abstract, really different.

None-the-less, on a scale of 1 to amazing: it's decent.