first smudge

my first smudge i really really like it
C&C plz

(current)

please post some C&C

I like it. And yet don't like it. I don't like that kind of smudge. Its good, but the text placement could be so much better.

like where, i suck terribly with text

Dont like it because its just yet another smudge *sighs*

I like it but i agree about the text =) Maybe make it stand out a little more?
:D Nice work