Suji Bachi

http://linje12.net/hjulle/biiiilder/.../sujibachi.jpg


need some critiques so i know what to improve until next time :)
you can also see it here... http://www.deviantart.com/view/28476097/

I saw your whole DA. I liked it very much and I think that was my most favorite piece out of there. It's very clean and has sort of a little bit of simplicity to it.

i saaw this on your DA account to theres some nice pieces too

what software did you use to make ther render?

anyhoo i like the bg is nice and make's the render stand out and the render it'self is awsoem but some of the edges look a little choppy imo

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Originally posted by Ragidy_man@5 Minutes Ago
i saaw this on your DA account to theres some nice pieces too

what software did you use to make ther render?

anyhoo i like the bg is nice and make's the render stand out and the render it'self is awsoem but some of the edges look a little choppy imo

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the render is done in cinema 4d
and yes i agree with the edges, but i didnt really know how to fix it... or maybe i just didnt have enough energy to do it..

I don't particularly like symmetrical renders.. but i like the way you've used this one, not many abstract c4d renders are in clean, crisp peices. I love the yellows and greys also , and the complete opposite with a super shiny render. :D Nice work. Maybe a kinda typical vector type blood splat behind the render. Nothing too bold though ^_^

you don't have to cram a peice of art full of stuff... minimalism ^_^ ^_^

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Originally posted by Dale@13 Hours Ago
you don't have to cram a peice of art full of stuff... minimalism ^_^ ^_^

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agreed fully.

I like the way you presented this, normally I would use renders for energy art full and cluttered but I like the minimalistic look you have given this. Great job and great choice of colours.