Brand new, made during the Super Bowl ^^

please post your comments/criticisms, i need them to get better
http://x2.putfile.com/2/3521170035.gif

Could soften it alittle more. maybe try and blend the text box into the image. or give it a border. pretty good job. not my favorite style though.

i was trying to make it kind of harsh looking, like i think a mech pilot would see >_<