Haegemonia

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/6...iasmall6tg.jpg

small version, larger one can be found on DevArt

comments/critique highly appreciated

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upper parts seems very blurry in the small version Oo so pls take the time and take a look at the larger one

Meh, just brushes i think, and the planets look demented, and why do the planets reflect from diff directions?

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Meh, just brushes i think, and the planets look demented

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used standard brushes with selfmade textures for some smaller parts, rest free brushing with tablet ^^

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and why do the planets reflect from diff directions?

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when light hits the atmossphere, it glows, a planet near two or more suns reflects light into two directions

Get rid of some colours, get rid of the plantes/fix them and generally spend more time on it and it could be promising, at the mo just looks ermmmm as though theres no effort been put in?

Keep it up :)

i was like wow untill i scrooled down and sow the purple
it ruins it by alot
and the planets on the bouttom the right one it has a shdaow in the middle,that dont look to good angle your shadows
but i still think it looks nice good work

Pretty nice piece man. Somethings I noticed:
-The planets seem to be missing textures or the textures aren't visible enough.
-The colors are awesome but I think it would look better if you lowered the opacity on them a little bit.
-The stars don't seem to be random enough.

I really love the colors. Overall it looks very nice.

I really like this but the colours seem a bit harsh. I would lower the opacity on them a bit.

i really like this piece of work. its really bright and the stars are well-placed.