First :
The BG is ok although a bit repetative, i think this sig is one of your best but the render needs blending, add a gaussian and motion blur to the render :)
Second:
The BG is sort of odd and doesn't match the renders, the text is ok though, but the emboss could be turned down.
third:
Its not bad but its not good, the text is hard to read, the render is see through :o but the BG is ok :)
Fourth:
Definatly your best so far, just fix the outer glow on the text
Fifth:
Change the text and blend the render and i say it would be your second best, looks quite nice good job
Sixth:
Has no border, render is pixelly and doesnt match the BG and the text is hard to read ;)
Overall good job and i can see you improving :) Just keep it up
02-23-2006, 05:50 AM
Ashiki
Ben basically said it all but I'll add some more about the best one (the fourth)
I think you could lower the opacity of the scan lines ever so slightly, and make the text less dominant, possibly put it in the centre? But that's up to you.
