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i hope u didn't use a Wacom to paint it... best advice i can give you is to either get a wacom if you didn't use one, or if you did, spend more time on it and work on your basic drawing skills.
Not bad, but use a biggr sketch next time, and try to get rid of th elineart if you want it to look realistic.