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the mountains and the mist looks pretty good BUT FIX THE CLOUDS AND THE SKY. The clouds are not really 3d and i think the colour of the sky is wrong, must be darker, but overall good job!
Firstly , i'd say design your landscapes bigger. Try to create a feeling of size with your sculpting. For the top of a mountain this seems very flat, and too smooth a rolling.
Also, on top of mountains there is no grass. Rock and snow, and that's rough, not smooth.
I like the sky , but when you're up that high the sky is brighter ( i think , if i remember correctly :P ) . . And doesn't have so much of a gradient to it.
Basically just the sculpting, to work on. :)
woo i never new it could be so complicated :P
anyhoo ill try to work on the sky and the shaping of the terrain
You wouldnt want me to be honest, but it looks decent. ^_^
honest would be fine after all it is constructive critacsim i'm looking for
i like it, the clouds don't bother me that much, and the actual mountains look really good. snow looks really realistic, and good depth with the mountains.
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i like it, the clouds don't bother me that much, and the actual mountains look really good. snow looks really realistic, and good depth with the mountains.
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i like the surface and fog. it make a felling of cold place
but sky destroy it. this sky is in summer, hawaii style ;p
and clouds are sux
i only noticed the clouds when people started to mention it and they are quite patetic, i have to agree