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Well i've been messing around with this for a while.. tell me what you think, where i could improve.. and don't say anything if you honest to gawd can't see it straight away i don't want some jip staring for hours and making up something for me to work on which is pointless.. :D
I dont like the blur on yourself, well around your head atleast because it is hard to make out that it is your head :P Thought it was your arm at first. I like the deadloader text, i just dont like how sharp it looks. I like the no border on this one. Other than that looks good man keep em' coming. :)
yeah i've made an update before people start posting away i got my friends to critique before i posted it.. so i started work on another .. it's almost done too just some kinks i gotta sort out..
imo everything except the perspective on the photo is really good. it just looks liek a big green block.. it took me 5 minutes to figure out what the hell it was :D
I quite like it. But i think there are way too many weird colours.. green blue red and pink don't really look good together. It also seems strange where you have the "flat brushing" ontop, like the blood etc, then the realistic photo, and then semi-realistic torn paper. That kinda confuses me XD . + the white space in the top right looks weird, i'd put your name there instead of on the left :)
This'd probably look 10x better if it was 2x or maybe even larger :)
hmm well as i've said i'm recreating and i'd suggest waiting for my next instead of critiquing now and are you people whack?! green and pink and red don't mix? that's retarded.. red and green go weel together and it brings it all together, so say for instance i chanegd my shirt pink it would looks gross.. it makes sense to be green you have alot of something or it becomes boring.. quite obviously no one here knows alot about chromatics?
I love the paper and paint border, I just don't like the blurred BG.
