^^ i know the 1st one text is abit bad, just havent been able to find the time to change it.
feedback ftw!!
05-18-2006, 01:26 PM
DevilWithIn
the only oen i dont liek is the top one lol
05-18-2006, 09:07 PM
Gurdev
Yeah, the first one is kinda blurry and you cant see the render that well, the rest are decent, keep praticing
05-19-2006, 02:21 AM
Silvermoon
yer hehe thanks, ill try and update the 1st one asap :)
05-19-2006, 09:11 PM
Virulent
cool for an amature but needs a lot of improvements. for the first one remove that thing overlaping the render. its annoying and distracting. the second on, there is no flow... i hate the color. dont do that to renders. let the render have its own colors. insted of changing the color of the render, change the color of the background so that it fits the render better. for the third one u made the render too light.... its not very attractive.... the white light on the left is distracting. it make the light the focal point insted of the render. also the moon unevenly stretched. for the last one the background doesnt fit at all... and the text is bad. use a better fitting font and background.
05-20-2006, 01:49 PM
Lord_badass
the 2nd and 3rd look the best, they only thing I dont like its the white light on the right of the 3rd seg.......good job
05-20-2006, 07:45 PM
hypermonkey
not liking the 1st one or the animation on the last one u should try to clean the animation up
05-21-2006, 02:23 PM
SgtSwabs
I have a human mage with that armour set ^^. Anyway they are okay but you could benefit by reading the tips on this forum.
05-23-2006, 04:12 AM
Silvermoon
lol i do read these forums, and ill try to keep all ya advice into consideration.