Serious Crit please.
http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/9...ssenger9ss.jpg
Few hours work, C4D + photoshop.
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Serious Crit please.
http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/9...ssenger9ss.jpg
Few hours work, C4D + photoshop.
I think the render is way to bright in some places, especially the four circles on the left. I also don't like the blur/smudge on some parts of the render. Other than that its ace, I love the concept. Awesome job, keep them coming.
Overall it looks nice, the render is placed well, fits with the 3d render, and the text looks good in the position it's in. But there are some things like the 3d render, the edges need to be Anti-Aliased / Rendered to a higher quality, and at a larger size// then sized down.. Also, the background does not create a feeling of depth and just kind of flattens, and doesn't add to the image. Center the background around your foreground image :) You've done this at the bottom though :P Erm... nothing else to add, with a little more it could turn out nice. Also - I wouldn't apply an adjustment layer as the only source of colour, it makes it look dull and just harder to look at :)
