http://xs101.xs.to/xs101/06230/gohan2.jpg
wut u think?
Updated version:
http://xs101.xs.to/xs101/06230/gohan3.jpg
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http://xs101.xs.to/xs101/06230/gohan2.jpg
wut u think?
Updated version:
http://xs101.xs.to/xs101/06230/gohan3.jpg
Its a little plain. The lighting does'nt look that great and I think the text need to be colored. Doesnt look finished to me. Hope to see more :)
yeah, it looks kinda like you stopped half way through making it, I don't like the text at all. I just think the whole thing needs more interest
it needs more contrast, and some kind of border; it looks to soft atm. also the lens flare-ish thing looks out of place and too bright. this could be improved a lot.
hm....I like the text :D
i didnt look good with a border to me...I guess ill add some more effects, depth, and the lighting
thx for comments
It's ok, but there's no direction, and very little detail.
more lights and darks in the bg....