Better for a noob?

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j8...8/Scorpion.jpg

Hope im getting better :)

weird my sigs dont come out wit boarders... Hmm ill fix that tommorrow

Background is better than usally, could use some more color, kinda borein, and i dont like the blur on the render, makes it stand out to much, and not blended, text is not good either, gj for a noob, just telling u things u can improve on, keep up the good work