The first one is a bit over-contrasted. I'd say I like the second one the most except I think you should add a 1 px border around it. Good Job.
06-23-2006, 11:09 PM
Arkanian
2nd one is best
i see you put that advice i gave u to work ;) looks good
just need to change font, and maybe color of text
06-24-2006, 08:04 AM
Freak
There's no need for a border imo. The render looks squished though, and the C4D is random. Work on flow.
06-26-2006, 12:35 AM
Cold Fusion
I like the boarder, makes it look better, Render is just a tad bit squished, but i dont feel like fixing it, and i wasnt go for c4d flow, i was going for a c4d spladder effect,
06-26-2006, 02:11 AM
Freak
Well, it's a mess. Hey, you asked for comments.