Ultimate Final Fantasy Sig

this sig has like...30 efects. if theres something bad on the sig, just tell me to fix it up, cause i wanna be a god designer

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/6089/firma1730ni.gif

I'd say give it a 1 px border, and work on render blending
Also the text is to small and unreadable.

Everything is done reletivly well, i like the contrast and colour of the bg. Tech brushes are good, can't read the text. Is it By TSM? if so i had a hard time seeing it

Colours are nice, Id say blend the render a little more and the text is pretty much unreadable.

The colors on the render don't match the theme of the sig, and the bluriness makes me feel like my vision is off. Text is pretty unreadable. And another thing - thirty effects does not make a sig 30x better. Often, less is more.

but on the positive, the tech effect is well done, and I like how the angle of the abstract brushing matches the direction Luna (?) is leaning.

So a decent job, just work on a few things.

btw, I don't play FF so if that isn't Luna then sorry.

how about now?

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/3...rma17320wc.gif

Text is better but i liked the render when it had more colour in it

I like the motion and lighting of your sig, she seems to fit in there just right, only problems I can see is that the contrast is a bit high and text was unreadable, but i preferred just the FF not final fantasy myself.

I think it looks good, except for all the little color blotches from it being too high contrast.