suggestions on this one... pixel stretch/grunge style

http://h1.ripway.com/ripwaysucksass/...effectcopy.png


i saved the psd to this if anyone has some suggestions of stuff i can add to this or maybe change to make it better pls share lol :)

thats not yur best...for sure...

iono

maybe all together it wa a bad sig...good concepts...bad sig

details? lol just saying its a bad sig doesnt help me very much
i only like it for the blending i did on the render

the background is a bit boring

its only a pixel stretch with a grunge brushing over top

The render is to small and the sig is to big so it makes up for a big empty space in the middle and like nash said, it's boring. You use only one colour so use more than one colour. Sigs most of the time look alot better with more than one colour. The pixel strech doesn't count as colour since there is such a lack of it compared to the brushes. Also, the brushing seems repedative.

Good concept, bad sig :P Just not put together that well :)

srry i was in a rush when i wrote that

yeah...like small render...big sig...doesn't work...pixel stretch has also beeen played out...try new styles..

i know its played out but this was suggested to me when i did the pixel stretch lol thats only reason i did it

there is 2 colors blue and green blue where the render is green where magic is... but i was just testing this out i didnt like the pixel stuff under the brushing i only liked the render :)

it lack color, looks like it got all washed up