Fatherhod Sigs

feedback appreciated

i got a color one...and a monotone one

Fatherhood monotone
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/8...hoodnon0he.jpg


Fatherhood Color
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/6...odcolor6js.jpg

its monotone
and i dont really like the text; it stands out too much
id say if you fix that then itll look good

thanks for the feed

The second one is good. I dont really like the first.