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ooh this ones a nice job. the motion blur works out, but maybe lower its opacity a little. kind of hacks up the bg a little too much. the text works in the top right, but the glow on the bottom left text kind of messes with the mood you have set in the top right. the bg is ok, the grid is nice on the left, but none on the right i think kind of hurts the whole right side.
it aint that bad cuz u juss startin
mostly he said whatu should do, get some lighting in there too
ain't bad tho
i think its well done yea a grid on the right sounds good... maybe make it a yellowish color and lower the opacity to it
