new one in making help ?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...hitmancopy.jpg
anythign i can do to improove it ?

Not bad but its a little too plain/open area. The text needs work, i dont like it. Im not a big fan of brushing over the render and it could use a little blending.

any more help guys ?

maybe a gun in the background, like under the brushing, or a city scape or something.

juss a lil bit on the blending

i actually love the text...and fill up the areas with somethin

i don't kno, smudging, cd4...iono...try somethin

lol

i really like it.. nice job on the bg and the txt is nice... just add another render or something into the background like a tilted gun behind him

no a tilted gun? that would look lame..

yup deadloaders right. i tried it with a gun behind it mucked it up

This man obviously has some dark aura surrounding him. When you put bright colors next to him, he looks vulnerable in the picture, to add the correct feel, make it a bit darker around the character.

a tilted gun was just an example :)