New Sig, First C4D

First in months and made for a guy at another forum. I dont really like using C4D at all but i had to please teh noob. :p 2 versions, what you guys think?

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/2476/zxxx2sh7.png

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/8646/xzdv1.png

I would want more saturated colors, and you should work more on the text. :)

Sorry for not giving a better answer.. I'm tired, just woke up. ;)

i dont like the render