eye.2

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A second attempt. Better than before, but still not perfect...

it could use a little more expression, though i can't really help that much, as i have no idea how to brush.

i kinda like the idea, but it's really blurry. (obviously...) i never saw the first one, but i bet this in an improvement. just keep it up! :D

Just a bit more detail on the shading and on the iris(the colored part), and it'll be damn good.

i was thinking, "whats wrong.. something is missing...", then bingo! eyelashes! add some of those, and it should look alot better (gets into the uncanny valley and what not :P)

Yes it's definately blurry, I trlu don't know how to make it look crisper. Eyelashes, huh? I'll try that next time...

that's it. they eye looks naked without eyelashes. really, it does! :D

Keep in mind that nothing is exactly one color. In a green eye, there are other shades like brown.

If you want a less blurry look, use a hard brush, it's what most people use anyway. Avoid airbrush at all costs unless you want a mist effect which can still be done with a hard brush :)

i'll send you some pics if you want them.... ;D


of my eyes, of course. they ARE green...


:D

Actually, I could use a few pics. Your entire face would be better, because that's where I need some practice. PM them to me if possible.